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| Lauren 2007-06-09 ch 15, anon. | abuseHey, I havent finished reading this story but what I have read so far is rlly good... There's just one thing tho... in the backround info for ch. 15 u said that josie and reilly live in ontario but at another point u said josie's brother is in cegep and they dont have cegep in ontario.. anyways just thought I'd point that out ttyl bye |
| ShadoWings 2006-08-07 ch 23,  | abuseI just sat here and read the whole story (I do that alot) and it really good. Some parts could be edited, which you're probably aware of, but otherwise it was good. Honestly though, I had to laugh when Jake thought Reilly had killed Josie. Great story, well done. |
| Serenity the forgotten 2006-07-31 ch 23, | abuseGrace I love your story. It's AMAZING, I swear I almost cried reading Josie's letter. Anyways congrats on this story and good luck with your other stories. xox Emmy xox |
| PaiselyAvenger 2006-07-17 ch 21, | abuseYay! Things are going better! or are they? :) Like what you're doing with Kristy and Jake. Not at all expecting that. Keep it up! And update soon. Now, preferably. yes. now. |
| Sam 2006-07-10 ch 23, anon. | abuseWow...i just read this whole story and it's absolutely amazing! You're such a great writer. You have so much talent! All I can say is keep writing!:) |
| Turdlock 2006-07-05 ch 23, | abuseaw. very sad. this was great, awesome job. i want to hug Reilly. |
| pull-the-trigger 2006-07-04 ch 23, | abuseOH MY GOD! WOW! I loved the ending, it was awesome! Swet, you rock dudette...I'm a little hyper right now so don't mind me. ^.^ |
| somuchformyhappyending 2006-07-04 ch 23, | abuseyou finished it! GREAT STORY! okay...I gotta go now. ciao. |
| somuchformyhappyending 2006-07-04 ch 22, | abuseooh! You updated SIS! This is bex17, by the way, just on the other penname of mine. This was really good! Update soon! |
| DiddlingFiddles 2006-07-04 ch 17, | abusejust letting you know.. when someone opens their eyes and they're in a coma it's normal. people can open their eyes but their pupils won't dilate and etc. |
| Callisto Jean 2006-07-04 ch 23, | abuseOh yey! You're done, you're done, you're done! OMG! Josh died! He's a psychopathic maniac! |
| kla bee 2006-06-02 ch 21, anon. | abusei love gracie, yes i do!i love gracie, how bout you? like, omigod! ur stories are so awsum to the ninth gazillionth power!like wow! ur like totally my idol! anyways so yeah, keep writting AH MAZING STORIES DARLING! tty soon |
| kla bee 2006-06-02 ch 21, anon. | abusei love gracie, yes i do!i love gracie, how bout you? like, omigod! ur stories are so awsum to the ninth gazillionth power!like wow! ur like totally my idol! anyways so yeah, keep writting AH MAZING STORIES DARLING! tty soon |
| Jay-Enna 2006-06-02 ch 21, anon. | abuseOMIGOSH POOPIE! I love your story!Does Josie die? does Reilley die?TELL ME HURY UP OR I WILL PEE IN MY PANTS...okay maybe not but...yah! |
| Mindy 2006-05-28 ch 21, anon. | abuseOMG im soo happy you put up another chapter for this story =D its like my fav story by far! =^.^= i love the way kristy acts its funny!! cant wait til josie gets outta the hospital! im looking forward to reading more -love ya xo |