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| MizSphinx 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abusewow yet another beautiful (gosh that word is so overused yet it fits the poem exactly!) piece. This almost had me going off on a plot lol. *click* favs hehe --MizSphinx |
| Plinky 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, beautifully written. Rhythm is lovely (something I'm never able to do properly) and the emotion is really nicely conveyed. He's really lucky to have you! ;-D Keep writing! |
| xRoxyfoxyx 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abusethis just said everything how I feel for someone- he's the exact same way- its hard to want to help someone who doesn't want help- this is beautiful- great work :) |
| StarFariey 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abuse:'( its so sad! i wanna help him too! |
| Naibz 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abuseaww. if you were going for the sappy effect you did a superb job. |