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MizSphinx
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abusewow yet another beautiful (gosh that word is so overused yet it fits the poem exactly!) piece. This almost had me going off on a plot lol.

*click* favs hehe

--MizSphinx
Plinky
2006-04-10
ch 1,
abuseWow, beautifully written. Rhythm is lovely (something I'm never able to do properly) and the emotion is really nicely conveyed.

He's really lucky to have you! ;-D

Keep writing!
xRoxyfoxyx
2006-04-09
ch 1,
abusethis just said everything how I feel for someone- he's the exact same way- its hard to want to help someone who doesn't want help- this is beautiful- great work :)
StarFariey
2006-04-09
ch 1,
abuse:'( its so sad! i wanna help him too!
Naibz
2006-04-09
ch 1,
abuseaww. if you were going for the sappy effect you did a superb job.
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