oh wow, love it!
brilliant beginning based on mists of avalon, but a brilliant twist at the end of chapter 2 with the saxons!
cant wait for an update!

Wow, talk about a good chapter. So much happened, I don't even know where to begin...

Well let's start with Gorlois. From what little I read of him he sure made an impact. He did seem to love Morgana very much, but his relationship with Igraine is the complete opposite. Sadly enough though I can understand why, religion can be a nasty thing and in his mind he only wanted what was best for his child.

Oh but I did love the way he died (does that sound morbid??) lol anyway it was very dramatic and quick, but it didn't seem like it. Those darn Saxons!

I hope Igraine gets out with Morgana, or maybe Uther will come to her rescuse lol.

Oh my! Oh my Oh my Oh my! This story is breathtakingly beautiful! The words flow together so wonderfully and the emotions and atmosphere are described in such vivid detail it sparks my jealously!

I cannot understand why you haven't had a review yet, honestly I can't. I love this Arthur stuff and many MANY times I have tried to write my own story (I figure I need more time, for now I'll stick to 'The Mists of Avalon' and 'The Queen of Camelot', two of my favorite books) ah but anyway, your words flowed together so nicely that it made it seem so easy (grr I hate you lol).

Well you can trust that I will be checking back for more (just to add some pressure;) )

Good luck :):):):):):)