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Kaye90 2006-06-06 . chapter 1
"Don’t worry darling/

Everything’s going to be fine/

Your last words/

Before you/

Left me in the dark/

Just because I’m young/

Doesn’t mean I’m naïve/

Our worst sins/lies/

Are the ones we’ve never told"that was my favorite part. it could almost stand alone, as a poem of its own
Made in Britain 2006-05-01 . chapter 1
Thanks for the review. This is good I can see where you're coming from. Most girls tell me I'm too ugly to understand, I hope I have your problem one day ^.^
Sugar-Craze 2006-04-14 . chapter 1
Reminds me kind of thepoem, "Disguise". Both narrators are kind of hidden behind a stereotype, whether they want to be or not. I like this poem! Wonderful work! :)

sugarcraze.
moodyspasmodic 2006-04-09 . chapter 1
wow...thisis amazing.i really love your writing.
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