 Kaye90 2006-06-06 . chapter 1"Don’t worry darling/
Everything’s going to be fine/
Your last words/
Before you/
Left me in the dark/
Just because I’m young/
Doesn’t mean I’m naïve/
Our worst sins/lies/
Are the ones we’ve never told"that was my favorite part. it could almost stand alone, as a poem of its own |
 Made in Britain 2006-05-01 . chapter 1Thanks for the review. This is good I can see where you're coming from. Most girls tell me I'm too ugly to understand, I hope I have your problem one day ^.^ |
 Sugar-Craze 2006-04-14 . chapter 1Reminds me kind of thepoem, "Disguise". Both narrators are kind of hidden behind a stereotype, whether they want to be or not. I like this poem! Wonderful work! :)
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 moodyspasmodic 2006-04-09 . chapter 1wow...thisis amazing.i really love your writing. |