hahahaah! my god i got SO fooled with this one!! i seriously thought he'd cut her open or something! especially after reading 'safe keeping' which was kinda freaky...and i didn't quite understand it, but i got the really morbid feeling they were dead in that one, so i thought it might be really weird, haha not that it wasn't, but it was actually really funny! love the end, 'Ben grins and places the bag of insides on the counter. "harsh...can i eat them?"' i was like WTF?!?!??! hahah thought he was a weirdo cannibal or some demented thing!! then it was suddenly, you took all the marshmallows, hahaha i didn't realise how fast my heart was beating till i read that! then it was just whooshh, completely fooled i was, i'm not sure if i'm allowed to vote seeing as i'm not an author let alone a member of BUG! i just love reading stories hehe, but yeah, this was ACE!

hope you keep writing!

haha!! that was ** HILARIOUS!

haha this made me laugh! awesome!

-twitch, twitch- umm... what? it was... unusual. well written and everything... but...?-o.rhia