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| Ethereal Oceans 2006-04-30 ch 4, | abuseI'm sorry it took me so long to review but maybe it's better because I've had more time to read it over and over and I love it more every time I do. This is just as ** amazing as the rest of the story, if not more. The dream is so freaky and the joint.. you describe them smoking it so beautifully. I ** love this. Please update soon. I cannot wait until the next chapter. :D |
| Ivy 2006-04-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is beautiful. I rarely read stories on this site that I like and I'm actually looking forward to another chapter. You have talent that not many writers on here have, so be proud. |
| Decollage 2006-04-26 ch 2, | abuseLike poetry, but moreso. Curious to where this will lead, brilliant work! |
| Ethereal Oceans 2006-04-26 ch 3, | abuseI ** love this. Sean and Trent sounds so perfect together and they are so perfect together. This ** story is perfect. Every detail. It is so sad and beautiful and real... which makes it so unbelievably scary, like it's all happening to me or something. It makes me want to cry. This is awesome. As I have said before, I knew you were an amazing writer but I never thought you were capable of writing something *this* amazing. You don't deserve to live in this little shithole we live in. You will do so great in gsa and all of the people there will be jealous of you. I hope hope hope you finish this because for me it would be like buying a book and getting in to it and finding out it's incredible and then losing it in one of your lockers or something if you don't finish it. And that really is a horrible feeling. The imagery in this is so FLB-like and beautiful but yet you've made it your own, unique. I ** love this so much. Keep writing, please please please. |
| Ethereal Oceans 2006-04-23 ch 2, | abuseHoly. **. This is.,., perfect. This almost made me lose my dignity and there are very few stories that can do that. You described this so harshly and beautifully, two things that are really hard to have at the same time. I envy you. -lol- I really really really hope you finish this. It's a "masterpiece" as I have once said and will say again and again, in the words of Hollibeth. I absolutely love it. Please, write more. |
| sleeping with ghosts 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really good beginning. I loved your first chapter. Mm,you made that guy sound so passionate. It was great. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. |
| Ethereal Oceans 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is by far the best thing you have ever written. And yeah, I realize that I say this every time you come up with something new but this beats them all, I promise. It's so harsh and real and beautiful and FLB-like. No offense, but I didn't even know you were capable of coming up with something this stunningly awesome. I have read actually published books far worse than this... now that I think about it, I've hardly read any books better than this, really. There are lines in this story that have stuck in my mind since the first time I read it. Please, for me, finish this. It will be amazing, I can tell. It has so much potential. Please, please, please finish this. And I will love you even more than I do now. |