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| heidimp2006 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseoh my jillie this is super cool! it makes me want to cry a little bit!! love you hun! |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseaw... bittersweet... good work keep writing! |
| Needa S 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseMemories are beautiful and so it your poem. Awesome write. |
| The Postscript 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseOh wonderful!! This reminds me of one of my best friends, who I've known since before elementary school started...our moms were friends when they were pregnant with our siblings, our siblings were friends and now us. And I still look at my friend today and am continualy amazing that this friendship has lasted year after year and endured through the most difficult, trying times of our life. Your poem really expresses that strength that friends give you, that over the test of time, even when you move on you'll still have those bitter sweet memories. Great work, sorry for the...mini-story there but keep writing! |