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| Smoky Bear 2006-08-15 ch 1,   | it's never easy to loose someone special. especially to the supervillian of cancer. you suffer too and this is evident in every line of this story. It's not selfish to wish that person still alive, nor is it selfish to weep for your own sake as well as theirs. I hope you're feeling better. and he'll always be alive in your hearts. so glad to see you are alive, well and writing. |
| KASoroka 2006-04-10 ch 1, | =( this was sad, made me want to cry. Nicely written. You may want to think about adding detail( what he looked like) readers only can see what the author tells them. This was sad, and it went on my favs. This is so sad...well written...but sad. |