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Vulpes Vulpes 2006-09-26 . chapter 1
I love how you've written this, and how you have described it all so clearly. 'So everything's blue/From my mood to your eyes' is a brilliant line! I also love the way you describe 'The idealised image' of someone, and I think that you've written it in such a perfectly honest and precise way that a lot of people could relate to it and understand it. Though this is a sad poem, it's still a very beautiful one, and I think its quiet sadness really amplifies its beauty!
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