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| Hidden Lies 2006-05-03 ch 1,  | abuseWow, you speak my mind! Although I could never write anything as good as this! Love it! Love YOU! |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abusenice metaphors all of them.. I like it a lot |
| Arisnoe 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abusethis is so well written. great job. i'm adding this to my favorites. |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseaww!! I know the feeling, love...I love the ideas you bring to the table here, especially "-My heart is a battleground,Where I’m fighting a losing battle,To hide the truth I feel for you,I’ve lost while you’re on my mind.-"sounds like song lyrics...you're awsome.--pammy- x3 |
| Ben Wuest 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseLoved it, absolutely; top to bottom, this is a sign of pure mastery. You've still got it, J. B. |
| FrostedTeardrop 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseA very beautiful poem. You have a lot of talent. Never stop writing. |
| claire 2006-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abusefor some reason it reminds me of Funeral Of Hearts by HIM. anyway, it is good and you get the point across. keep writing. |
| Alishanky 2006-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseCant be bothered signing in but u know i love it josh. More bloody poem writing in maths.. it must be a disease :SHankY |
| firebenderZula 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThis does sound like Kingdom Hearts II theme song doesn't it. |
| method acting 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseSanctuary of Hearts. That reminds me of a Rufus Wainwright song. You are so improving and I really do like this piece. It just seems a tad bit repetitive. It might have been what you were going for...but I was expecting a BAM at the end, but there was none. But really really good form here. Really, you've improved so mcuh. Haave you been taking courses? Great job. Really. |
| Jess 2006-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is really sad josh =(.. once again i luv it... i i can relate(have done) 2.. 'My heart is a battleground,Where I’m fighting a losing battle,To hide the truth I feel for you,I’ve lost while you’re on my mind.' luv u XoXoXo |
| Princess-anna57 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseHey Josh! Aww, such a sweet poem. Like Melanie said, you'll found it someday. Always believe. Keep being an awesome person! ^_^ Good poem mate; excellent! Write on, and always smile! ^_^ ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Melanie Layugan 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseYou'll find it one day Josh *hugs*, and it will have no end! Love the poem by the way, you've really outdid yourself! Melanie |