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| Ashelin 2006-04-14 ch 1,  | abuse...wow...thats so deep and...scary |
| RiddleHerDreamsAlive 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThe layout could use some fixing as you're disrupting the flow of your poem with the whole "I see hazy clips of a (skip a line) life untold." All in all, however, I think your poem has potential. |
| Jezsh 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI like this piece. The word selection is really nice and I like its crispness. Nice piece. |