 braindead1345 2006-07-18 . chapter 4Your welcome! :) um...one thing that annoys me is that every time you what to make a point,you make it in all caps,you could try something else,like i dunno,it gets annoying. sorry for the critism,know for the praise! :) That was a great cliffhanger! And that thing where he was cheecking her brusie... mad i bet Jason is **... |