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braindead1345 2006-07-18 . chapter 4
Your welcome! :) um...one thing that annoys me is that every time you what to make a point,you make it in all caps,you could try something else,like i dunno,it gets annoying. sorry for the critism,know for the praise! :) That was a great cliffhanger! And that thing where he was cheecking her brusie... mad i bet Jason is **...
Ecco-bonanza 2006-06-08 . chapter 3
Awsome sotry, really good twist! can't wait till the next chapter! and should they call the...uhh...POLICE? lol oh and the chart you made of the apartment doesn't show. and also you don't have to tell us the color of the wallpaper in the room...lol... see you at swimming! and I AM NOT THAT BAD OF A SLACKER!! lol.
braindead1345 2006-06-07 . chapter 3
YAY! new chappy! o...cliffy! whats goin on?
braindead1345 2006-05-01 . chapter 2
O...a trqulizwer...maybe his ex was really, REALLY mad? Please update soon...please? this very oc for me, so conteue,FOR CHRISTS SAKE!
braindead1345 2006-04-10 . chapter 1
sounds good...interesting beginning, hope you conteniue.
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