Reviews for Poem For The Lost Ones

Holy Descendant 2006-10-26 ch 1,	abuseRUNNING AWAY I am a little bit of loneliness a little bit of disregard Handful of complaints I can't help the fact That everybody can see these scars I am what I want you to want what I want you to feel But it's like no matter what I do I can't convince you To just believe this is real We always run away like we always do It's the fact that we can't run away from Sometimes we just wish to dissapear But some has to be remain hidden And not found I can't feel the way I did before Time won't heal this damage anymore I don’t know what’s worth fighting for Or why I have to scream I don’t know why I instigate And say what I don’t mean I don’t know how I got this way I know it’s not alright For we are humans
bob-chan 2006-04-10 ch 1, anon.	abusevery nice and good point! no one is perfect! it touched me and I hope your friend did read it! keep up the good work!
Sapphire Wings 2006-04-10 ch 1,	abuseAw!! This is such a sad poem. I can totally relate and I like the simplicity of it. Haha, for someone that's only 13, it's pretty good ^^