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Darkened1 2007-07-06 . chapter 9
Remember, every chapter brings you a picture. BUT ONLY EVERY CHAPTER!

PS I still own Aiden, right? X3
Fallen Roze 2006-05-16 . chapter 4
so someones alive huh? (trying to act like i don't know what's happened) wonder what she'll find.
Fallen Roze 2006-05-16 . chapter 3
I never thought as earth being beautiful but i guess in a way it really is. hm...what does her heaven look like? besides perfect? anyway on to the rest of the story: that guy is so cruel to do that! and I feel so bad for the humans. and for Karya.
Fallen Roze 2006-05-16 . chapter 2
I wanna see her in that dress...in my mind she looks really pretty lol and: aw so cute!
Fallen Roze 2006-05-16 . chapter 1
wow she's so happy! I bet I would be too! o off to read about the gala...
CK Shorty 2006-05-15 . chapter 8
What a cliffhanger and I wonder who the men are. She should've spoken up when she was accused! But I like the story anyway. Short chapters, but good and I understand that you want to stop at the suspensful endings..which is evil. :) Keep up the good work.

CK
CK Shorty 2006-05-15 . chapter 2
The slight obsession with Aidan is cute :) Another wonderful chapter.

CK
CK Shorty 2006-05-15 . chapter 1
The summary attracted me to this story and so far, I really like it :) The detail/description is really well done..I'm a bit jealous ;) Keep up the good work! I'll continue to read.

CK
Crazy Talk 2006-05-10 . chapter 8
Okay. This story rawks harder than most others I've read. I want longer chapters too. And this stranger is officially mine. So hands off. *growls just in case*
criti-sized 2006-05-10 . chapter 8
I was hoping that you'd update soon, because for a second there I thought you'd deserted the story and reviewers, but you hadn't. Phew.

So I thought this was a great chapter and nicely written even though short( don't worry, I like short). My only words would be I hope you update soon.
Darkened1 2006-05-10 . chapter 8
YAY!! I am like, so enthralled, and I can't wait for you to update. I was going to draw You Know Who's mommy, but I decided that it was too much effort to walk down stairs to get my drawing book. They will be done shortly, though. I'm too excited to wait for too long. Two weeks at the most.
Polished Gem 2006-05-09 . chapter 8
Yay for kind-hearted elderly gentlemen! Otherwise Karya would starve. Now that Gabriel has decided to be her guardian angel of sorts...I wonder when he will choose to talk to her...Anywho...I guess I'll find out...great stuff as usual. You and your description...
Polished Gem 2006-04-23 . chapter 7
Btw...chapter six is one of my favorites...because of the whole wing thing in the alley. *chuckles that you forgot to add a chapter* Yeah, yeah...I'm late about reviewing this, but *smirk* I'm not the only one. lol. I also like the whole scene in front of the council. I was quite surprised that they would sentence her without allowing her to even defend herself once she had awakened from her faint of shock. Obviously their defence system is very different from that of the human world. As usual, I likes. How much do you have done of the next chappie? Anywho...g2g, my food's on the stove, and I don't want it to burn. That would definitely be something to pout about. Gah. I just finished my last exam today and my brain's completely fried. Anyway, going...going...gone!
darkened1 2006-04-18 . chapter 6
I cannot believe you forgot a chapter!! I cannot believe I missed it!! There are so many things in this world that are untrustworthy.

You are now one of them. I'll still read though.Why? 'Cause It ROX!! You need to name you-know-who, you-know-what. It will please me so.
Nerdette 2006-04-18 . chapter 7
Love it! I hope nothing bad happens to Karya...
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