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Reviews For: Behind these Walls

blackdragonoffire
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abusevery interesting. The names you used were quite common John,Billy, Smith I like it though. I'm a little confuesed as to why John and Anne got in that fight in the middle of dinner but thats okay. Keep up teh good work-Ema
Ryustorm
2006-05-02
ch 1,
abuseUnlike your review, i actually read this. in the furture please do not leave reviews like that on my account. its rather obvious that you had not read my story, correct me if i am wrong.it seems that your previous reviewer was rather more sympathetic than i am. -the story: well for a first chapter it wasn't bad, there is not much of the plot for me to review. but the conversations were quite genunine and the grandmother's antics was quite interesting.-
MorganTW
2006-04-29
ch 1,
abuseYour review on my story was weird, why would I pretend to read your story then say it was awesome...if I'm gonna read your story I'm gonna read it, I won't pretend to...that's stupid.

Erm Anyway...

I did actually like this a lot! I found Martha really funny, bless her, screaming for her medicine like that. Oh...Kickett City...Funny... (like Kick the bucket city) Cool I like!

Hope your thinking of updating soon! I'll be reading it...:) Just don't leave anymore weird reviews on ma story okay, Lol. Buh-bye!

-MorganTW-
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