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Reviews For: Crumbling
toastyluv
2006-06-07
ch 1, 		I love the way u did the lines in this! Its written very well.
red amavia in the twilight
2006-04-10
ch 1, 		The whole tone is so accusatory; like you know they hurt you and you want answers. I like the harshness and how hurt you seem. Great writing. Well done.
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