hi! it's skeeter the groundhog! first i wanted to thank you for reviewing my lit story "What Cheli Did". my theory is that if someone takes the time to reivew for you, you ought to return the favor, so here I am! this is quite good. i recognized the word Necromancers from a book...have you read "Sabriel"? i think that's the title anyway.well, i think this is a great start to your story. i do like t'oft and reghnall's characters so far. keep up the good work!

Yay, I'm you're first reviewer! Thanks for reviewing my story, I really appreciate it. I'm just returning the favor here. And you never really find out why elves are enslaved to humans, it's just, like you said, and author's license.

I like the writing style of this story. It seems like you have a really elaborate plan thought out in your head. I tend to do that too. The beginning paragraphs I thought were a little murky, but they got much better. Great chap! Update!