Das ist sehr wunderschön!! Marvelously thrilling. And the end line... I love that. I do. It made me squeal.

...I want to whisper this to people in the hallway...

Er... wow. I'm speechless, impressed and very grossed out.

That was mind blowingly brilliant, and at the same time absolutely hilarious. It makes me want to squeal like the little girl I am. SQUEE! It's delicious, thrillingly so. Yum.

holy crap, this was deep. i dont even thnk i can describe...

hey I like this! I only found this by accident when i was searching for writers who are fraudulently using my real last name "blair" anyway I do think this is good and I really didn't think there was an excessive (use of) puddle lol anyhoo well done ~spider~

Wow, your tanlented... again this story is amazing(i need to fnd words besides "awesome" and"amazing")I like the idea of a gut eating the girl he loved1s heart...twisted love just took on a new meaning...

I really liked this ^^ i wish that it could have been longer, but then it probably wouldn't have flown as well ^^ i love it!!

points. and yes, "herz" is German for heart... interesting idea.. very descriptive, though.. i wanna read the stroy that this character is in.

please read my lookup! i need help!