Aie! I forgot how absoultely sweet this was. Gosh, I could read your stuff over, and over, and over again. You need a publisher.

I like it, a lot... but I was a little disappointed they didn't wait until their wedding day to kiss. Also, him "calling in sick" when he wasn't sick was out of character for him... someone devoted to God wouldn't lie just to go on a date.

I reckon you should develop this more. :-) Tell more of the story. :-)

Awesome! Keep writing for God's glory!