this sounds good. i hope you continue

Yeah...that happens sometimes.

That was a very short beginning. Hm-hm.

You switched tenses for the last sentence, by the way.

Well, you write well enough, and I'm curious what the storyline is so let's see some more.

I'm your first review! Or, at least I hope I will be. I already read this and I still like it. Yes, yes. Especially since I'm betaing this. So I might be a little biased, but whatever. Um. Yeah. I hope you continue writing this soon. Don't worry, I won't bother you to write it or anything. I'll just make you feel guilty. Horribly guilty for ignoring this story.

I like it, very mysterious and slightly cliffyish. Yay for writing something your actully going to keep up?

-Lily