I have nothing bad to say about this poem. It is very well done, emotional and sad, but also very powerful. It would make a good song. One of your better ones for sure. (most of them are pretty good:))

Remy

magical and melancholy at the same time. good work

Beautiful, beautiful poem! The last stanza was my favorite. =)

~Christine ^.^

Wow. I never thought I would read a poem so touching. Each verse painted a picture. Very good. ~!Nick!~