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| mex.chika 2008-04-12 ch 21,  | abuseomg, just finished reading the story! its great! friggin amazing! love it! |
| mex.chika 2008-04-09 ch 7, | abuseI'm loving the story! i just had to comment on this chapter, so cute! |
| Water Block 2007-03-26 ch 3, | abuseCoolness. Tired. Need bed now. |
| Water Block 2007-03-26 ch 2, | abuseI liked this chapter. Jasmine's friend, Mia, seems like a little manipulative. Justin's character sort of grows on you. He's a fungus. |
| Water Block 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I opened this story, because it's from the boy's POV. |
| kneeknew 2006-05-23 ch 20, anon. | abuseminisignal1! Double Thumbs up for You!! for just one sitting i had to finish the story coz i couldnt sleep till i get the whole story done!! i should salute you for coming the story out in a unique catch... coz you sure did catch my attention... this is a cool literary piece though! Congratulations. |
| verka90 2006-05-22 ch 21, | abuseoffcurse they should end up together!this story could end so interesting! |
| TricksterGoddess 2006-05-15 ch 20, anon. | abuseHaha, yay. ^_^ I'm happy now, thanks for the extra chappie^^ Well, thats good that they're still together, but Justin shouldn't be cheated on Vian, but that is probably just a cover up in Justin's mind. I would be happy for a sequel, but you don't have to if you don't want to write more.. intimate scenes:P So yea, thanks again^_^ I like how you fitted the chapter in with the 'end', haha, that should confuse people^_^ |
| verka90 2006-05-15 ch 20, anon. | abusegreat story i love it! theres gonna be more right? |
| without-you-im-fine 2006-05-15 ch 20, | abuseThat's good!! Still sad in a way... Yes she has to have his child!! :) |
| kingess_of_the_leprechauns 2006-05-14 ch 11, anon. | abuseThis is brilliant, I'm in actualy hysterics as I type this reading this chapter. Brillian twizt, classic! I love you! |
| TricksterGoddess 2006-05-14 ch 19, anon. | abuse*whines* OH COME ON!>< Can you at least write a sequel or something on what happens, or like an epilogue? Please?> |
| punk-pwincess 2006-05-14 ch 19, | abuseaww.a very good story!*claps* |
| without-you-im-fine 2006-05-13 ch 19, | abuse:O You can't leave it there! :( Aww.. What's going on with them then?? Aww:( |
| Callisto Jean 2006-05-13 ch 19, | abuseThis can't be the end! Ah! Fine break my heart! Lol. I can't say I wasn't expecting that because I sort of was. (But I was so hoping it was't going to happen!) You did a great job making us anticipate a happy ending when there was no such thing. I hate Terry for saying he 'doesn't care anymore' when it was his fault they had to be like this. This is a great story but I really want to know what happens next... |