wow...thats an amazing poem you are so talented i hope one day to become as good as you are keep writing

You put a great deal of imagery and depth into your work. Your use of mystical abstractions-crosses, moon, earth, hell, make the tone identifiable to the reader. Giving the reader a basis for your comparisons and connections. You write with emotion, from what I've read so far, and more importantly specific emotion that is tied to something tangible. This is both a marvelous and difficult thing to incorporate. Well done.

You seem to use alot of what's the word, I want to say analogy's or whatever they are, I'm not very propper in my terms, but comparing an emotion or a feeling to a person, but twising it's meaning with angst. well ,yeah you have some good ones and a few that didn't strike me, for example the desert misses the rain, its rhythm and content were good. Rudolph one however...but there was an abundance of good lines, I like those small lines that have a beauty and a sting to them all in one little phrase.