When you say you don't want to clog your page with "cheep prose," I assume you meant "CHEAP prose." And I won't pretend that I know what prose you were referring to, since all of the writing in this collection is poetry.

Thank you,
Beatrice

Tired of Knowing and Untitled are very well written a catchy!

That's a very interesting analogy, but it is true. As the old saying goes, whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger.

I liked this. The repetion of the line "You can disappear forever..." was really effective and I liked how the last one was a different. It really allowed to to ring out and cast itself into my mind. This poem was good, but I think it was a bit long considering it was the "your xxblankxx means nothing to one who (has no)/(cannot) xxblankxx" I don't know, it was still good though. Def keep up the good work!

That is amazingly written. I like your style.

There's some nice work here. The way you ask questions of the reader and your use of repetition is particularly effective.

Not that I know terribly much about poetry, but I like what I see.

great poem- the way the words fit toghter is brilliant and it flows really well. The meaning of the words as they have beenplaced is really good as well.

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Loved It! Laterz!