this IS english an if u cant read it u must be THICK. U get a life. if u dont want to comment on my work DONT COMMENT ON MY WORK!

Sad and cynical. I love the part about progressive-ness. Your writing style is so unique, because you throw thoughts into the words, and spin a story from it. ^_^

what a finale. the subtle rhyming in this enhances the piece so well. i've wondered about this too.

i think the title sums everything wonderfully; it's remorse with the bitter aftertaste of resentment.

Whata great summary. The formatting is very interesting, I like how this was set up. You obviously put some time into it. THe ending is very morbid...but it's still left open for perception. I like that. Nice job.