Nice job expressing yourself. Great poem. Sadly sometimes we can't get what we want. My deepest sympathies.

~Twilight Starr~

Wow. Is this what it is like for you? Because I've been there too. Even now my mother is an alcoholic. I'm sorry if you've been through this because I have too. I knew what was going on. It was quite original. Very exspressive, you definately got your point across.

I enjoyed the repeating opening line...and this poem is powerful to me.

I don't have a true review to write, but thought I should let you know that I liked it.

::bursts into tears for the bazillionth time today:: So sad...and wonderfully rhyming. I don't know if this is really from personal experience but it sure sounds like it is: it's a poem that you can really feel...crap, I've run outta tissues.Anyway, I loved it