|Reviews for The Gray Beach under the Earth|
| Cerne 6/10/06 . chapter 1
I really didn't feel like I was going to get pulled in through most of it. But in the last few paragraphs you really pulled it together. I like the tower metaphor. Its interesting. I wish I could give you a review as long as the one you'd given me but I'm afraid I really don't have much to say.