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| Ladywilde 2007-05-13 ch 1,   | You did a really nice job with this...very much like the orginal and yet, there is def. your own take on it. Which makes it really intresting and cool. |
| Lil Firecracker 2006-04-12 ch 1, | Hmm, looks like I'm going to have to read "Resume" now. ;) I can tell how much fun you had by the last two lines, it certainly gave me a laugh. Anyways, just a thought from a possibly insane stranger who thanks you for your review; Maybe 'some pills' would work better than 'the pills'. Unless you had specific pills in mind, of course. Yeah... I always /try/ and find some sort of suggestion. >.>; Haha, I loved the poem, and I'm off to read "Resume" now. :) |