Junk indeed, because it is just a moment, but you know what you get a bit of characterization in here. I think that being able to describe real people you see (and make them interesting) is a talent that writers should try to cultivate. One could make exercizes out of it.

I clicked this because there is something so simple true about the description "the cool man". I use it; I've say "the cool guy".

Yeah, this piece is just admiration.

lol, you tell this so well, that he's very definitely "the cool man". it's funny, and intriguing, and brilliant with description.

Breezy and light, I like it. Wonderful, poetic, magnificent! You come up with the greatest stuff.

Wonderfully interesting in pace and description. Like a snapshot of humanity. Well written, the tone of this enhances the overall work well.

ah, that reminds me, i got some wicked sunglasses this weekend, at ehem, a mall.but that is very coincidental, i swear, this place is a throng of poets.sometimes

but i saw a nice looking boy in a department store. a bit old though, nice in a suit.

and i saw some wicked hair, it probably makes my day.

by the way, i like the poem, hah, i am getting all caught up in brea