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Halcyon Impulsion 2006-07-04 . chapter 1
Oh my. Perfectly profound until we hit the spaghettios :) My favorite parts? --I feel suddenly desperate (the octopus unleashed);

and craving more than sweet, aromatic leaves.-We are Vikings again, and the sea turned to night.
Sheets 2006-04-18 . chapter 1
"My intestines have forested into tangle"Amazing. I loved it.
coal and marigolds 2006-04-11 . chapter 1
I love how rambling and chaotic this poem is -- it really sets a fabulous mood for what you're trying to describe. Great, original stuff.
ronshaberry 2006-04-10 . chapter 1
Funky and unfocused, it swings from one image to another. Nice.
Moondog Dozier 2006-04-10 . chapter 1
This is so interestingly out there. So many random connections that seem to connect somehow when thrown together with such purpose. " I feel suddenly desperate(the octopus unleashed);" is just unspeakably marvelous. The whole lovely-strange congregation of words and phrases is lyrically gorgeous. A new favorite.
RedneckWoman 2006-04-10 . chapter 1
I really like this poem. Its really neat, and it shows you know how to write.

Keep up the good work. ~RedneckWoman
Aquafied 2006-04-10 . chapter 1
hahcute

my sister was watching titanic today

oddly enough
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