Oh my. Perfectly profound until we hit the spaghettios :) My favorite parts? -I feel suddenly desperate (the octopus unleashed);

and craving more than sweet, aromatic leaves.-We are Vikings again, and the sea turned to night.

"My intestines have forested into tangle"Amazing. I loved it.

I love how rambling and chaotic this poem is - it really sets a fabulous mood for what you're trying to describe. Great, original stuff.

Funky and unfocused, it swings from one image to another. Nice.

This is so interestingly out there. So many random connections that seem to connect somehow when thrown together with such purpose. " I feel suddenly desperate(the octopus unleashed);" is just unspeakably marvelous. The whole lovely-strange congregation of words and phrases is lyrically gorgeous. A new favorite.

I really like this poem. Its really neat, and it shows you know how to write.

Keep up the good work. RedneckWoman

hahcute

my sister was watching titanic today

oddly enough