ha ha, your style is amusing, to say the least. much enjoyment, write some more will you?

haven't reviewed in ever, sorry.

jesus, the title was wha got me, it was just perfect and made me want to clicke and learn more about it. and that first line is delectable, just pretty and hooks you into the 'verse of the poem. lovelylovely.

~* noelle

Well, I've never heard your poems before this day, so I have to say this one was retty weird (in a good way) and something about it... It features you talking to yourself like the title suggests, so I laugh. Good job.

I mainly came here in respect because your on the shitlist, and you took note in me. Thank you.

I barely know Chibichocobo, but I can't stand plagiarists. Thank you for the support. We will bring her down!

Peace!

Darket

this is good. i like the way it's written, you can't know exactly what, but from what you can tell from it, it's real good.

god, this was so brilliant. i loved the beggining. that first line was captivating. every verse was so lovely and brilliant. the last one was so lovely also. fantastic job♥

OMG! I cant believe wat u sed in that comment. thats so unfair! HELLO im 18 and im doing my A LEVELS. This poem doesnt even make sense. u cant call ME stupid when u cant right a poem that makes sense. GET A LIFE!

Broken and disconnected thoughts. I like it. Not in much of a reviewing mood, though. But I do like it.

i like the flow of it and the first stanzas, also.