 Nikolaevna 2007-06-17 . chapter 1Very well written! *claps*
I was a bit miffed at the fact that there are only a few entries regarding or pertaining to Feudal Japan, but reading this made my day. Thank you for this; I appreciate your views on the subject. There are a few typographical errors here and there, but not too much that it wholly affects the entire work. However, I'd like to suggest enclosing the numbers for the supplementaries in brackets, as, at first, it actually left the impression that they were merely errors as well.
Aside from those two nitpicky details, I give you my kudos for having written your view point on Japan's modernisation quite excellently. *bows* |