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| Kaye90 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseoh i LOVE the last two lines: Scribble marks/ And a broken pencil not again they stick out, give the poem character. thats what i love most about your writing: it has such CHARACTER and uniqueness |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseThe voice in this is wonderful once again. It really creates an innocence of tone then switches toward the end. Good concept. Well done. |
| Matet 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseaw. taking back a person that's already broken your heart. that's sweet. |