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Reviews For: Love and other traumas

Kaye90
2006-06-06
ch 1,
abuseoh i LOVE the last two lines:

Scribble marks/

And a broken pencil not again

they stick out, give the poem character. thats what i love most about your writing: it has such CHARACTER and uniqueness
Moondog Dozier
2006-04-15
ch 1,
abuseThe voice in this is wonderful once again. It really creates an innocence of tone then switches toward the end. Good concept. Well done.
Matet
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseaw.

taking back a person that's already broken your heart. that's sweet.
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