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| Kaye90 2006-06-06 ch 1,  | abuse"who can socialize with a statue/ a little girls imaginary friend/ created out of social boredom/ circles go on and on/ words last forever/ but who will remember you?/ we can’t afford to trust/ in something as useless as/ a statue/ fingers pointed/ fingers crossed/ a statue/ pretty but useless pretty useless"that part is the part that really flows and sings. the beginning is a little stiff, warming up, then you hit the sweet spot. |
| Bernita Bean 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseVery nice.I like the base idea, the bit of being frozen. Stone.I like it very much. In fact, I shall print all your works and keep them in a folder. XP Much Love,Pumpkin |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseI like the wonderful word circles that you create in this. Very well developed work. |
| Sugar-Craze 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseA statue.. Ver interesting topic. Like other works of yours, your poems are very well thought out, usually asking questions and answering them through-out the piece. Nice! :) Missed,Sugarcraze |