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| Kaye90 2007-04-08 ch 1,  | abuseoh, wonderfully cynical and (as you said) ironic! your language always flows well and fits in with itself perfectly. the tone is sharp (which is perfect for a poem titled needles, eh?) and the phrasing simply perfect. develop your talent, keep writing! |
| Bernita Bean 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuse*laughs*Unfortunately, I can relate to those kinds of needles.(Also unfortunately, "Closet Thoughts" was based on personal experience. X0 ) Much Love,Pumpkin |
| sunday night sky 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abusei love the whole piece! it fits together perfectly - love the dry sarcasm and irony. wonderful! |
| Sugar-Craze 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseUnique topic! :) Love the well thought out way you write this poem, kind of answetring your own thoughts out loud.. 12 year old power! lol Sugarcraze |
| Princess-anna57 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseInteresting concept! Keep writing. ~Anna~ |