Okay then.

I really like this noll. Tis very dark!

Da Kiwi x

well that made me depressed."songs about suicide at two in the morning"but diet coke makes me like that too so...

An interesting way of putting it, as usual. I like it - 'ninetofive / boxed and / wrapped up in daylight / then left to / the hum of strings' a nice bit there. keep going.

Very, very good, keep it up

I like this! It's so defeatist, so apathetically metaphorical and a thousand other good things. My favorite lines are definitely "I can't see the stars/this far into the city/(metal sparkles just the same anyway)..." Because...it's true. Keep writing1 bella