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| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2006-07-31 ch 1,  | abuseLast line sumed it up nicely, another good poem. Simple and effective^_^ |
| Jeoal 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI love how the theme of this poem seems to weave through all parts of a person - not just the physical but the mental, the emotional, the spiritual. It has a raw openness to it that makes me feel like the person who wrote it (you/ the 'I') is reaching out of the words and grabbing for someone (the 'you' in it), trying to hold onto the honesty of them. It has such a pulse. It's so short and sweet, but so not at the same time. It's timeless. I hope, if you were inspired by a certain person, you showed it to her. ;-) This is wonderful. |