yea i know last person in the world you thought would leave a review right. you ar very talented and i like reading reat stories though and you have been one of the few authors i remember... uhhm no im not trying to get back in your life i know i blew that one. and i know its too late for an apology and yea im sure this work is faded out but i just want to tell you though i know by now hundreds have already said it ...you are a great writer and i know one day i will see your works in book stores across the country and probably the world. keep it up not that you need me to tell you or anything ok im rambling take care

This sounds like sum of the stuff iv been writing..heh, so its safe to say i can relate, lol. Great poem once again, keep up the great work!

Perfect. This is exactly how I feel about my current boyfriend. It's funny how someone can be your life line. I mean I could live without him. Yet there is a part of me that couldn't. If that makes any sense. lol Anyway, I love your work. Keep up the good work! You have an awesome style.

I love the sureness of the narrator and the fact that he/she shall "surely fade away // If you are gone for too long." There's no question about it - he/she just knows that this is how it is. It's the ultimate deal - life for love. The voice in this is just so strong in giving everything to the "you," so much so that it's almost painful. You want so badly to hope that the "you" never leaves the "I." It's beautiful. So strong and pure in emotion. Like they say, short and sweet. But so much more, too.

I really like this!! I love the verse:

(I should surely fade away

If you are gone for too long.)

I really love that. I am a fan of all your work.

P.S. I use to (and some times still do) update under the name Wild Irish Rose!! Just a heads up. TTFN! ;)

I like this. its short and...perfect. lol.Analeigh