Absolutely wonderful.

You have such a unique method of communicating succinctly and beautifully. I love the message of this poem, particularly.

I think I see a bubble, now.

interesting ideas communicated from this poem. nicely done

keep writing!

Interesting - not as intoxicating as your others and that added punch that I’ve come to see from you was a bit vacant as well. It’s a clever little idea and narrative of going into people’s heads and seeing what’s in there. To watch through another perspective and gain something - something worth understanding perhaps, and not just the tiny things that make a person who they are that, when in the wrong hands can be dangerous. We all have to keep secrets, if we didn’t we would turn into animals. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.