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The Un-great-ful 2006-05-15 . chapter 2
Sounds disturbing, like a forced imprisonment in your own mind.

Good

Alan
The Un-great-ful 2006-05-15 . chapter 1
Interesting opener, don't like the use of pain and painful in the same short sentence tho!

Alan
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