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| La Gitane 2006-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseLess parody and more a reply? And this -- " But still I ate and held my bile/ Gagging while I tried to smile" was more darkly menacing than anything else! But thoroughly enjoyable all the same, and delicious last two lines. :) M, that's one of the John Donne poems I like. I tend to be a bit iffy about him... |
| drblueface 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseHahaha, I liked this. ^_^ And this line, I thought was genius; "But still I ate and held my bileGagging while I tried to smile" It made me smile, thank you for that! Keep up the great writing! ^_^ |