I doubt the fire love was what destroyed the campus, that fire did save Lillian and kill Ory'hara and many others. It was good, though it's a bit rushed.

No!! You killed him!! Ah, well... it was a good plot, kinda short, but good, anyway. How about a sequel?

A classic Shakesperean tragidy. Very odd. I have to admit, this is not my version of love, as I believe it takes TIME for two people to love each other (and I'm talking about Lillian). If I were her, I would have never gone with the alien because he would have creeped me out. Some alien has stalked me for my entire life and then he comes down and tells me to go away with him and live far away from earth? Nuh-uh, no thanks!Anyway, I guess it was OK, if a bit beyond what I normally like to read. I also think that this could have been extended a bit more, given a little more detail, maybe.You have platypi to attack people if they don't review? My friend has a wallaby...odd.Adios,~Meghan (a.k.a queen amoeba for right now)

Umm...I don't know what to write to this one. I mean ...it's a little beyond my logical reach on love. But then again some of my close friends and family say that i'm romantically deficient, so my hats off to you(as you once put to me).

hello! it's krista, finally reviewing! yay!! very creative; i like a lot. *round of applause* well, the platypuses (or would it be platypi?) shall remain dormant for they shall not attack me for not reviewing. mwahahaha!! talk to you later!! keep up your awesome spifftastic work!

Wow you are bizarre.And I mean that in a good way.I liked it alot,but as a girl coming from a family that consists of nine boys,I must say that your male character came off as someone that had the tendency to become psychotic,too bad he died in the end,huh?Maybe I just read the character wrong and he was romantically inclined,or too in love,you see,I'm not.Good job though.