| Reviews for Morgue of the Desert |
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witeaya 12/3/10 . chapter 28i cannot imagine how the kind vince can became so hostile |
bowchicawowow 11/24/08 . chapter 5it doesn't seem odd to her that he keeps bgging her about patrick's theories? m and i wonder what she's gonna think when she realizes that she never gave him directions |
avidmoonstar 12/16/07 . chapter 28I really liked this story. Generally I like reading stories about vampires and such, but it's always interesting to read a new take on how vampires live. I can't wait to get caught up in the sequel. |
Kana 6/25/06 . chapter 25 Oh, I love you. Two chapters in one go... Anyway... I was suspecting this to happen sooner or later. Actually, I knew it from like the chapter in which Patrick got turned. It was so obvious that one day she'd want it too. Aw...well, I feel really sorry for both. Kana P.S. Is the new gang secretly evil? |
starrynight04 6/25/06 . chapter 25 *on edge of sit* |
Kana 6/24/06 . chapter 23 Oh, okay. Hurry if you can, 'cause I wanna see what happens next. -fangirl- Kana |
Kanalily 6/22/06 . chapter 22 Hey, thanks for replying to my review! It made me very happy. Nobody ever really replies to my comments, so I'm pretty glad that I got my own little bold paragraph. Actually, I don't think that the Debbie-ness is something you should worry about. I'm probably the only person to have even had that thought come across my mind, which isn't actually that surprising. Yeah, I'm weird like that. William came across to me like some English country pretty-boy, for some reason. I think it's the way he talks, or something- not too sure. He just radiates that idea. He's really courteous, and seems well-read. And with the heat- I can so relate. It's insane! I can barely sleep at night. Whoops, I think I wrote a bit too much this time. Okay, until next chapter! Kana |
starrynight04 6/17/06 . chapter 21 Thanks for the update! I also recently tried to go and see Panic! At the Disco. But the cheapest tickets were a hundred bucks! I mean, who do they think they are? I went to see the Strokes and it only cost ten... sheesh... |
Kanalily 6/16/06 . chapter 21 Wow, that was a good chapter! I like it. I think it's funny how Skyla forces him to do everything by using her affection. It's strange. Oh! I know what it's like! It's a benign Debbie from the Addams Family Values and a smart, cute Fester! Alrighty, sorry for that strange bit there... Kana P.S. Are they really snobs? I'm so sad to hear that. I heard that they were really nice. Hmm, maybe they had a fight earlier and were all sulky. Or maybe they really are assholes. Oh, and you're so lucky to have gone to their concert! |
TornXAngel 6/6/06 . chapter 18OMG! I can't get over you're talent. This story is amazing. I can't wait to see where you go with it. YAY! Patrick and Sky! Finally. I love you're style. It makes everything feel so real! I'm sorry I didn't comment on you're last chapter. For some reason Ficpress didn't send me an alert. Thank you for sending me that e-mail! It made my day. Update soon! |
MoriMorte 6/6/06 . chapter 18good chpt. keep up the good word i wish u luck on your writing |
JesterKing'sPawn 6/5/06 . chapter 17good chapter! can't wait to read the next one! |
Zara 6/3/06 . chapter 18 Aw. I was waiting for that. That was so cute. Please update soon! |
MoriMorte 5/31/06 . chapter 16awsome good job i wish u luck on your writing! |
TornXAngel 5/30/06 . chapter 16OMG! This is such an amazing story. I love it. I can't believe that you wrote it and you're just out of high school!Please update soon! I'm going to be thinking about this story all night. Poor Patrick! I can't believe that happened to him! Yay for Skyla going to see him anyway! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Your grammar and spelling are amazing. I only found one mistake. It was in chapter eleven: This my sound weird, but I trust Frank.: It says my instead of may. That's it! do you know how amazing that is? Thank you for sharing this story! Are you planning on getting it published? Rysta |