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| simpleplan13 2006-04-21 ch 1, | i like the chorus... very creepy yet loving... I like it a lot... i could help you get rid of the double spacing if you want |
| nilo 2006-04-11 ch 1, | Wow. This is really intense and good. Great sense of imagery and I love the repitition. Very passionate, I like it a lot, great job! |
| Bonfire Of The Sanities 2006-04-11 ch 1, | Wow...creepy and sensual at the same time...very cool...VERY nicely done! |