I liked this. It's immensely creative. It's not every day a person reads a piece such as this.

Oh, very creative! Your wordplay and allusions make me happy!

I do like this poem, because it's a new and interesting take on classical mythology. The situation is wonderful, and it's wonderfully executed. The only "problem" I have is its unreality (I THINK that's a word). I'm not sure Gaia would even talk to Venus, let alone ask Venus's advice. But nevertheless, the poem works very well.

wow, I just came across one of your stories and liked it so much, I couldn't stop reading until I was through all of your work. you're way of writing totally got me.Normally I don't review but I just had to tell you that. :D

This is different but yet I like it...good job!~Amber Dawn~

this is so, very, cool... the places where the lines end are clever. it's just such a pretty concept. awesome work.

I LOVED this. I'm very ADD with stories, and only extra special hooks - like yours - can rein me back in. This work has that magical quality that stops you from turning away, basically. I just had so much fun reading it, that I did it over and ove.r Unquestionably the product of a talented mind.

This is a refreshing frolic through mythology! I chuckled and sighed, and it came through so well. You are a very good poet!

I like this. :-) It's very unique and amusing - the first stanza catches the reader because, well, even though we are obvioulsy not planets, every girl has thought or asked that question - "does this make me look fat?"

This goes from being amusing to touching, and I'm definitely glad that I decided to swing by and read it.

Now I have to go and remember who Europa was. :-D

Peace. :-)

thoughtful take on foundations; interesting question-format. combined old and new. some unconnected feeling bits here and there - is there meaning to the breaks? a really quite enterprising piece. good view.