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| luv me like no other 2006-09-17 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really beautiful, and it draws out all the romantic memories someone had while dancing. |
| boys kiss girls 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abusehey, for the whole 'vaguely romantic' thing, I liked it. I like the rhythm I had going on in my head. =) |
| Sting Ferdinand 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseYay Michael Buble and appearances in Starbucks commercials!! Well, I haven't heard his version, but I'm sure yours is comparable. |
| laughter at the funeral 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abusei really like the rhymes and the rhythm...you really did a good job... truly yours... |
| sunday night sky 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abusei love the rhythm of this... love the second stanza. amazing job! |
| Lauren Wolfe 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWow...I think I heard a breath of wind with this one...made me feel as if I were actually gliding in the clouds...WOW! Wonderful poetry! Keep it up! ^^ |
| glen 2006-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abusewell! you could've told me the context. you were being all secretive and violent, y'know. but i could totally tell it was another going to be another poem! and it's a pretty good one, by the way. just that i am no good with the constructive criticism thing. i don't love the second stanza so much, though. |
| Holly Rose E 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseit makes me want to learn how to waltz... good job! |
| mich (lazy to login) 2006-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey I love this. :DI can't rhyme without it sounding stupid. I amENVIOUS!(: |
| Jezsh 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseThis has a nice rhythm. I like the simple imagery. It's pretty. |
| phoenixegg 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abusenot really your style and it sounds rather stiff. but i like the last stanza. (: |