|Reviews for butterfly instincts|
| dark stars grace 5/4/06 . chapter 1
so abstract, with fluttering imagery. and the title is wonderful as well. *
| she wants revenge 4/25/06 . chapter 1
gorgeous. i don't know how else to put it. effing beautiful
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 4/20/06 . chapter 1
| poetic abortion 4/20/06 . chapter 1
gorgeous. just..."she is flower-locked" is so amazing and perfect and
jesus, you make me incoherent.
| a lonely september 4/17/06 . chapter 1
'flower-locked' 'winter air dissolving' 'butterfly instincts' i want to drown in your mind.
| beti213 4/14/06 . chapter 1
makes me think of snow melting... and crocuses.I also like how "wonder" is centered in the format... I'll admit that I didn't completely understand this poem, but I think the language is beautiful.
| astral boy 4/14/06 . chapter 1
heh, this reminded me of "Corpse Bride". but maybe I read it too plainly. either way, it was nice.
| Chemically Induced 4/13/06 . chapter 1
beautiful imagery. "against the keylines" and "she is flower-locked" are my favorite parts. i loved the hinted notion that she may be trapped amongst some cold dead beauty. a fine poem.
| AllyCred 4/13/06 . chapter 1
I love it, very powerful and just beautiful!
| forsakensmile 4/13/06 . chapter 1
| she's not breathing 4/12/06 . chapter 1
love the ending, & also the way you use juxstaposition throughout this poem in a subtler way. beautiful.
| Aquafied 4/12/06 . chapter 1
reminds me of prisons and butterflyes.
scintillates almostlike a magic trick
it makes me want to disappear
| classic violet 4/12/06 . chapter 1
oh god, this is gorgeous. just, simple gorgeous. amazing. you've captured so much in only 19 words. beautiful.
| in theory 4/12/06 . chapter 1
I think that last line is the only one I grasped, and that's because it's so unexpected. Beautiful thoughts appeared from that, abstract and concise. Loved it, keep up the great work.