so abstract, with fluttering imagery. and the title is wonderful as well. *

gorgeous. i don't know how else to put it. effing beautiful

Lovely poem.

gorgeous. just..."she is flower-locked" is so amazing and perfect and

jesus, you make me incoherent.

* noelle

'flower-locked' 'winter air dissolving' 'butterfly instincts' i want to drown in your mind.

makes me think of snow melting... and crocuses.I also like how "wonder" is centered in the format... I'll admit that I didn't completely understand this poem, but I think the language is beautiful.

heh, this reminded me of "Corpse Bride". but maybe I read it too plainly. either way, it was nice.

beautiful imagery. "against the keylines" and "she is flower-locked" are my favorite parts. i loved the hinted notion that she may be trapped amongst some cold dead beauty. a fine poem.

love, .

I love it, very powerful and just beautiful!

Just beautiful.

love the ending, & also the way you use juxstaposition throughout this poem in a subtler way. beautiful.

kait

reminds me of prisons and butterflyes.

scintillates almostlike a magic trick

it makes me want to disappear

oh god, this is gorgeous. just, simple gorgeous. amazing. you've captured so much in only 19 words. beautiful.

I think that last line is the only one I grasped, and that's because it's so unexpected. Beautiful thoughts appeared from that, abstract and concise. Loved it, keep up the great work.