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Faithless Juliet 2006-04-13 . chapter 1
The double sided nature of our human personality - I am this way and I can’t help it - but I’m sorry if it hurts you. It’s hard enough to be one way or the other, just as hard as it is to not be both ways. We are all boundless creatures of confusion. Keep up the good work.

Juliet.
Femme de Dieu 2006-04-12 . chapter 1
Punch in the gut. I did this once too with someone, and yes it does haunt in those late night/early morning hours when just drifting in or out of sleep-- or as you say during sleep in our dreams.

I hope to have learned from that experience and am trying desperately not to repeat it a second time.

Because some things can never be UNdone, even though we'd give our right arm, or even our life in exchange for it.

TIME does not necessarily HEAL all wounds...just scars them over, as you say.

Excellent portrayal, Peach Rose. Keep 'em comin'!
Ellin Louise 2006-04-12 . chapter 1
I like the effect of this poem.
Annie Jadin 2006-04-12 . chapter 1
Wow. Having gone through something similar with a friend of mine, this hit home. Great writing.
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