Matthew James Current
2006-04-15
ch 1,   | Very nice work. One of your better pieces certainly. But it seems like you haven't quite found your muse, what brings out the best in your writing. Not a problem of course. Everything worthwhile takes time. But you had some nice creative touches with this piece. You juxtapose what could have been with what went wrong nicely and create a good solid piece. Very personal and a very effective style for you. This piece shows a lot of improvement and potential to improve even more. Just keep on searching within yourself as a poet and as a person. Express always, and never get discouraged. ^_^ Best of luck and I hope my reviews have been helpful. |
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