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| pretitiful 2008-09-28 ch 6,   | she's not going to ask him out. :( max is so cute though :) |
| supersaiyanx 2008-08-02 ch 16, | Update soon- a great story! |
| cue.dramatic.gasp. 2008-07-14 ch 16, | I would really like it if he ended up with Ellie. I mean, I know - it would be DIFFERENT if he chose Megan, but Ellie has been there longer. Besides, everybody has been waiting for this moment and Megan was just introduced into the picture. So I really hope he says Ellie or I'll be one sad reviewer! |
| leeland88 2008-06-11 ch 1, | LOL!! The first chapter of this is halarious! (If I spelled that right...) Please update! |
| InsaneRomantic15 2008-04-25 ch 17, | First off, I'm glad that you are rewriting this story! I've been absolutely dying to see more! Second off, I really hope you don't change a lot. The humor in this story has always been genuine to me, and I would hate to loose that. Very few stories can make a person laugh, feel warm fuzzies, and go through the drama like an actual character. =] |
| SecretFeelings 2008-04-20 ch 17, | OMG! You should have seen how happy i was when I read that. It went something like this (yes I am writing a mini-story XD(third person POV)): Whitney opened her email, glancing at the subject of the mail breifly, as she normally did. It said, [FP New Chapter] which was enough for her to open it without looking what story. She quickly clicked the link to the story, having read the summary and only slightly remembering. She glanced at the shortness of the 'chapter' and was disappointed. But when she saw it was a author's note, she consitered just leaving. Instead, she read it, for once, and started smiling. Her smile getting bigger and bigger with each sentence. At one pointshe started laughing, obviously happy about something. She then decided to write a pointless little review telling the author how happy she was. And now she feels stupid. |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-04-19 ch 16, | Ellie. Duh. Does that even NEED to be explained? |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-04-19 ch 15, | *Loves* HAPPY HAPPY JOY JOY!! THEY KISSED! :D :D :D |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-04-19 ch 13, | NO WAY NO WAY NO WAY!! I use the word spiffy so much it's not even funny. I think that "cool" and "awesome" are slightly overused, so I try to think of replacements. Spiffy is my favorite. |
| BeautysXxBrokenXxDesire 2008-04-19 ch 1, | i likey this story. :] |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-04-19 ch 8, | GRAHH! It's getting tons better, but words and letters are missing. Or rearranged. 'cha. |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-04-19 ch 3, | Darnit, she should just take the guy! It's stupid not to. |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-04-19 ch 1, | Jesus, I would totally go for him! I love crazy guys! I need someone who can keep up with my energy. XP |
| Georgianna 2008-04-16 ch 2, | This is so adorable! |
| candy-shop-owner 2008-04-08 ch 16, | You cannot make him end up with megan! Thats just wrong on so many levels.. i mean its not even a question if he should end up with megan! What are u thinking.. megans just the drama added to the story.. -.- How can u not mind with who hes going to end up with *gasp* what if megan turns out to be a total ** and maybe shes even in love with eric and hasn´t noticed it until a week after shes dating max!! NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO megan! And pls updated again pf its been forever they are already off to college and probably gradutaing when ur posting again :P jk pls updated again or at least let us know ur still alive! go Ellie |